The text heavy poster: provide some white space above and below the word "vote".
Paragraph works.
Overall, watch out for where longer words jut out into white space or where white space creates awkward gaps.
The alter poster: Can't read white text on white fabric. Plus, work with greater contrast with the word, Vote. And visually lock "alter the future" together with "vote" to become a singular statement.
Step back for a moment from this poster. Yes, the content is there and works nicely with your pun. Yes, it appears that the message is quite appropriate to your demographic. However, the image itself is not appealing, or very legible. Plus the type and image relationship is not strong.
I've only seen two images from your photoshoot. Cull through all of those you took and keep an eye out for those with good structure and open space to align type, those with vibrant color and those with legible objects. If nothing, go to the library and check out a book on Mexican crafts and dia de los muertes alters.
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The text heavy poster:
provide some white space above and below the word "vote".
Paragraph works.
Overall, watch out for where longer words jut out into white space or where white space creates awkward gaps.
The alter poster:
Can't read white text on white fabric. Plus, work with greater contrast with the word, Vote. And visually lock "alter the future" together with "vote" to become a singular statement.
Step back for a moment from this poster. Yes, the content is there and works nicely with your pun. Yes, it appears that the message is quite appropriate to your demographic. However, the image itself is not appealing, or very legible. Plus the type and image relationship is not strong.
I've only seen two images from your photoshoot. Cull through all of those you took and keep an eye out for those with good structure and open space to align type, those with vibrant color and those with legible objects. If nothing, go to the library and check out a book on Mexican crafts and dia de los muertes alters.
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