-Visuals are are pretty good. eye catching. the speech bubble form is conceptually appropriate and seems to effectively announce the content on a number of surfaces. Type looks good, but maybe pick one weight for the title and stick with it.
-Some of the applications of the stickers make more sense than others. perhaps developing a short set of rules or guidelines for applying these would be beneficial. the "take action" bubble seems appropriately placed, pointing to a specific way to take action, but maybe it could also be applied in proximity to something that needs help or needs action (ex. placing it on a run-down derelict house may encourage action to be taken to fix up the community).
Establishing some guidelines for placement will ensure a more overall effective message: Ex. "never lose sight" is maybe only applied in a context that seems hopeless, not hopeful. "be the change" already says "never lose sight", apply this sticker to something that needs a little motivation.
-When you start to decide more specifically where to place each one, you may find that some of your categories are kind of similar. revising some of the titles or copy may be necessary.
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-Visuals are are pretty good. eye catching. the speech bubble form is conceptually appropriate and seems to effectively announce the content on a number of surfaces. Type looks good, but maybe pick one weight for the title and stick with it.
-Some of the applications of the stickers make more sense than others. perhaps developing a short set of rules or guidelines for applying these would be beneficial. the "take action" bubble seems appropriately placed, pointing to a specific way to take action, but maybe it could also be applied in proximity to something that needs help or needs action (ex. placing it on a run-down derelict house may encourage action to be taken to fix up the community).
Establishing some guidelines for placement will ensure a more overall effective message: Ex. "never lose sight" is maybe only applied in a context that seems hopeless, not hopeful. "be the change" already says "never lose sight", apply this sticker to something that needs a little motivation.
-When you start to decide more specifically where to place each one, you may find that some of your categories are kind of similar. revising some of the titles or copy may be necessary.
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